Rizny ([identity profile] rizny.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kalalanekent 2010-08-30 10:16 pm (UTC)

Eeeeee, the last paragraph! Perfect!

Wonderful job on the internal thoughts and motivations of both of them - I particularly like Clark's, although him glorying in the beginning of The Mission and thereby not seeing her faint kind of makes him look like a jackass, LOL. I also LOLed at the constant mentions of Lois's shoes - gotta love those heels!

Oh, this has left me with a big grin. Wonderful job, ladies, and I can't wait to see the others in this series. XDDDD

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