kalalanekent: (Lois :: Caught)
kalalanekent ([personal profile] kalalanekent) wrote2009-10-03 09:54 pm
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*glances sneakily from left to right*

*whispers* Okay, so I know people are worried about the Clois. Especially with the turmoil they're going through.

Weeeell, I might just be able to help with that, but you must realize that this is in a chapter a couple of months from now and the actual wording and the scene itself is subject to change. Consider this a reason to carry on. :D


 

Kal-El stormed toward her, his eyes dark with anger.  “I lied to you, Lois.”

Her heart sank.  Oh God.  Lois’ rage stuttered to a halt, swept away by fear.  He never lied...
            
               
He cupped her face between his hands, and though he didn’t hurt her, Lois was aware of his great strength in that touch.  “I told you if you wanted a divorce, I’d give you one,” Kal-El growled, those stormy eyes on inches from hers.  “I lied.”  He kissed her then, roughly.



Told you! ;)

 

(Anonymous) 2009-10-05 10:55 pm (UTC)(link)
*fans self furiously*

Is it just me or has the room temperature spiked? Damn, but if only three wee lines can make my heart leap, then I can't wait for the whole chapter.

Keep on the good work! I know it'll be worth it.

Cheers,

Lauré :)
ext_34894: (Clois :: Passion)

[identity profile] kalalanekent.livejournal.com 2009-10-05 11:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Just give them time to get themselves out of this mess they've gotten themselves into. Things are tough right now and so dark, but we know these two well enough to know that destiny isn't going to let them off that easily.

And trust me, it'll be worth it. We've started three different versions of it just so we'll have it perfect when the time comes. Just keep remembering this when it gets too dark. ;)