kalalanekent: (This Strange Effect :: RedK Kal-El Lois)
kalalanekent ([personal profile] kalalanekent) wrote2010-05-05 03:03 pm

Also, On The Less Fluffy Side Of Town... ('This Strange Effect' Spoiler)

We haven't forgotten these two. There has been recent work done of TSE. It's just that we're taking our times doling out the sexy stuff because we don't want anyone thinking all we do is porn. Maybe a couple of weeks and we'll have the second half of this out. Between next week's EPIC chapter and me trying desperately to get done on Need You Now before the bunnehs or Anissa make me put it aside, it'll just take some time.  Until then, this is how things stand. :D

 

Lois seemed to unerringly notice it, too, and took shameless advantage of it.  He could feel one small hand tighten the hair at his scalp, her other hand clutching the back of his neck.  Oh, yes, she was more than a little bit angry with him.  “Don’t flatter yourself,” Lois forced out through her teeth.  “Why bother with teeth when a girl would just shatter them on that throat of yours?  Oh, no, there are other ways to get your attention.”


“And you know them all,” he growled, the pressure on his scalp only spurring him on.  This was lust and anger woven into each other so tightly it was hard to tell the difference, a heady mix indeed.  “From spraying soda all over me to wearing short white skirts split halfway to heaven, you know exactly how to make me notice you.”
 

Despite her obvious irritation, he felt a shiver run through her and roughly pulled her closer.  Unable to guard herself against it, her shudder was loud in the silence of the room.  Once the sensation passed, the hellfire came back into her eyes twice as strong.  “Right.  Like you have room to talk; this coming from a man who wears head-to-toe spandex while he flies around town,” she snapped back, hazel eyes locked to his with the threat of vicious revenge.  “Exactly where the hell do you get off lecturing me on wardrobe?  Especially when you were sneaking peeks at my underwear when I never thought you’d take me up on it?”

[identity profile] saavikam77.livejournal.com 2010-05-05 07:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Yowsa! ~O_O~

I do love the way Lois gives as good as she gets, though. ^_~
ext_34894: (This Strange Effect :: RedK Kal-El Lois)

[identity profile] kalalanekent.livejournal.com 2010-05-07 08:22 am (UTC)(link)
They certainly are a mess in the making, huh? *just shakes her head at him*

[identity profile] babettew54.livejournal.com 2010-05-05 07:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, boy, they do push each other's buttons! Getting good!:D
ext_34894: (This Strange Effect :: RedK Kal-El Lois)

[identity profile] kalalanekent.livejournal.com 2010-05-07 08:22 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, yes, yes that are! And just think of all the things he's not destroying right now because of it. *LOL*

[identity profile] athenesolon.livejournal.com 2010-05-05 10:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Especially when you were sneaking peeks at my underwear when I never thought you’d take me up on it?”

*ROFL with mirth over this comment* Doesn't she know the first rule of flirting? Never throw a comment out there unless you think they might respond favorably.

You don't know how much I needed this after the day I've had (will post about my day in a little bit).
ext_34894: (Lois :: Horror)

[identity profile] kalalanekent.livejournal.com 2010-05-07 08:24 am (UTC)(link)
Doesn't she know the first rule of flirting? Never throw a comment out there unless you think they might respond favorably.

Favorably is one thing. Flat-out sneaking a peek when he seems like such a nice guy? Totally blew her away. SO didn't expect it. AT ALL. XD

Aww! I'm glad it helped in some small way.

[identity profile] athenesolon.livejournal.com 2010-05-08 06:31 am (UTC)(link)
Favorably is one thing. Flat-out sneaking a peek when he seems like such a nice guy? Totally blew her away. SO didn't expect it. AT ALL.

She should have. Male rule of the animal kingdom. At least when flirting anyway. (Believe me, it's a rule sometimes even I forget at times).

[identity profile] xenokattz.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 03:09 am (UTC)(link)
we're taking our times doling out the sexy stuff because we don't want anyone thinking all we do is porn
-- This is bad? ;)
ext_34894: (Clois :: Passion)

[identity profile] kalalanekent.livejournal.com 2010-05-07 08:26 am (UTC)(link)
Serious authors don't write so much of zee prOn. And it's all the more hilarious because we've only been writing it for the last couple of years. You only got hints back in the old days. XD Now there's little bunnies everywhere!

[identity profile] athenesolon.livejournal.com 2010-05-07 11:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Serious authors don't write so much of zee prOn.

I don't know about that. There's plenty of serious ones who do it's just they tend to stick to the romance section of the library/bookstore. The few that don't (and end up in the erotica section and not the romance) tend to be the "less serious" authors.
ext_34894: (Lois :: Thoughtful)

[identity profile] kalalanekent.livejournal.com 2010-05-08 11:26 pm (UTC)(link)
I think my biggest issue with it at times is that I want us to be know as being great suspense writers, great action writers, and for our sexy stuff to be worth the reading. I really want us to be considered the whole package. I worry that too many love scenes might ruin things that way.

(Anonymous) 2010-05-10 01:56 am (UTC)(link)
Perhaps for the female readers but honestly I don't like to read overly romantic stuff unless it has a really strong b-plot (i.e. suspense or action or etc.). so in many ways it's required to build a strong package (and I'm a female reader so read my comment as you will).

[identity profile] athenesolon.livejournal.com 2010-05-10 01:57 am (UTC)(link)
Gah! Don't know why it clocked me out!

[identity profile] clarks-girl.livejournal.com 2010-05-06 06:14 am (UTC)(link)
It's just that we're taking our times doling out the sexy stuff because we don't want anyone thinking all we do is porn.

But you write such good porn ;-)
ext_34894: (Lois :: Facepalm)

[identity profile] kalalanekent.livejournal.com 2010-05-07 08:27 am (UTC)(link)
So I hear. *LOL* That's a plus, at least.