Before I got to the VERY end and read the footnote, I looked up GAF and found that it means gothic alien foundation... which could fit in this case!
Anyway, bravo and this chapter. Everything fell into place nicely. But the part that stands out the most to me is Jason's conversation with Jor-El. I have played around with a conversation like that between Kal-El and his father and it just never worked. So to have your Jason doing it was perfection!
Now here's the real questions... can you write Lois' death? I've thought about that one, too. Ugh.
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Date: 2010-11-30 05:40 am (UTC)Anyway, bravo and this chapter. Everything fell into place nicely. But the part that stands out the most to me is Jason's conversation with Jor-El. I have played around with a conversation like that between Kal-El and his father and it just never worked. So to have your Jason doing it was perfection!
Now here's the real questions... can you write Lois' death? I've thought about that one, too. Ugh.