~There's A Place That I Know :: It's Not Pretty There and Few Have Ever Gone...~

So worth the wait. I loved it. I loved Lois trying to find her way around the boat without getting caught and when she leveled her gun on Lex I thought for a moment she would win, then the shatter of the glass. I was sitting on the edge of my seat as they went after her and when Lex revealed that He had Jason I so wanted her to be able to kick Lex's toosh. OH that poor baby, Jason's such a sweety and Lex is so bad to use him to sheild himself but then again he knows Lois well and knows he was taking a Risk by taking them, never mind that Superman would be pissed. Lois is a force in of itself and I love how you kept that up with the story.

I loved seeing Ella make Richard squirm but then again I didn't because Lois has just as much guilt in this as he does. Still that bit was fun to read. They are mobilizing a plan but things seem to quickly be getting out of hand and Richard doesn't even know that Lois has been caught. Eep.

Then there is Clark. I wish he wouldn't have smashed that phone either he could have gotten to his babies but it seems as though Lex may have known that the recording would make them angry and act on emotion, darn him though. And then the Fires Lex had a good plan but I'm ready for him to go down and for those babies to be safe again.

Oh this was so great. I just love all of it and I'll be ready for the next update so keep up the great work as usual..