Finally getting caught up on this. Another fantistic well written simply lovely chapter. I really like Maggie's part in all of this as an officer and as a friend to Lois. She looks after Miss Stubborn thick headed reporter very well, and her character adds that much more to this story.
Hmm favorite parts, I like when Lois found out that Kala had known for three months and her thoughts on how her daugher could have ended who the Best Dad was. Also loved how you worked KAla into things from the movie, when Jason asks if Superman's giong to get better. Again love having the twins around they lighten the mood, not that I'm complaining mind you because I love what you have done with Lois pouring her soul out to the man she loves, but anyway all good
Glad Martha has Lana with her, but I feel bad that she can't see her boy right yet. Alright off to see the next chappy..if it's up...I didn't check just found this and started in on it.
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Date: 2007-08-04 02:38 am (UTC)Hmm favorite parts, I like when Lois found out that Kala had known for three months and her thoughts on how her daugher could have ended who the Best Dad was. Also loved how you worked KAla into things from the movie, when Jason asks if Superman's giong to get better. Again love having the twins around they lighten the mood, not that I'm complaining mind you because I love what you have done with Lois pouring her soul out to the man she loves, but anyway all good
Glad Martha has Lana with her, but I feel bad that she can't see her boy right yet. Alright off to see the next chappy..if it's up...I didn't check just found this and started in on it.
Great work as usual ladies, can't wait for more